A Gift of a Sword



A gift of a sword from the most renowned forge master sent a youth on a mission from a powerful Lord. A mission that is steeped in intrigue and danger that grows with every stage of the journey. A gift of a sword will lead him to his first love, adventure, lands far from his home, responsibilities beyond his years, and it will mark him for all to see as a man in full. A gift of a sword will lead him into combat, to a desperate fight for his life, to cause him to suffer the loss of comrades, and lead him to a realization of his own mortality. What else might the gift of a sword bring? This coming-of-age, becoming-a-man tale is set against themes of the factors involved in the failure or success of civilizations and their environments.

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Sunday, September 4, 2016

A Gift of a Sword has been published on Kindle Direct publishing

September 4th: This blog has been published as an e-book  under the title: AGift of a Sword  and is now available on Amazon.com for $2.99 per download.
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A Sample: Chapters one through three




Chapter 1 Setting the Stage


   Carr grasped the stone with both hands and grunted at the effort to lift it to the waiting hands above him. The stone was taken by the man above and he turned back to face the man below to receive another stone.
   He looked to the horse drawn wagon below and estimated how many more stones there were to be lifted up. Above him the masons were carefully laying each lifted stone in a bed of mortar.
The wagon looked to have enough to keep them going until sundown, bringing an end to the toils of the day. He tried to empty his mind of his fatigue and the pain from his hands which felt the hard use of grasping stones despite the leather gloves he wore.
It sometimes helped to remember why he and his neighbors were doing this, but at present his state of fatigue rendered that remedy impotent.
   Suddenly, there was a shout from above “ROCK”! Carr covered his head with his hands and arms and pressed himself close to the steep slope. Despite the feeling of alarm, he could not help but remember the first time a rock had fallen and the foreman yelled at every one to protect themselves by getting as close to the rock wall as they would to their girlfriend. One wise guy had called out:
   “I can’t get any closer! My buttons are in the way!”
   He heard the crashing rush of the tumbling stone as it flew past him. He straightened up and turned his head to watch the path of the bounding stone. It blessedly missed all the men in the chain below him. When it hit a very large boulder near the bottom, it burst into many smaller fragments which pelted the horses hitched to the wagon.
   The horses sounded their alarm and bolted with the wagon, the teamster desperately chasing after, having been aroused from his nap in the shade.
Carr and the rest of the crew burst into laughter; first in the giddy flush of relief that comes from a narrow escape. Secondly, and more heartily, at the hapless teamster rapidly disappearing in pursuit of his charges.
   As the laughter began to taper off, Carr felt a sudden chill up and down his spine. His father had been killed in a massive rock fall not far from this spot almost two years ago.
Carr was a tall youth recently turned twenty. He had handsome even features and a symmetrical face marred only by his slightly crooked nose, the result of a ball that took a bad hop in a game a couple of years ago. He had light brown hair and was growing a real mustache, his beard still the thin fuzz of youth. He had broad shoulders and powerful arms, not just from lifting stone, but from practice at archery since he could stand.
   The people of his valley were experts with the powerful six foot war bows they made, and they practiced with the sword from an early age as well.
Carr and the others were engaged in building a dam across the stony gulch to catch and to retain some of the furious run-off from the copious spring rains against the dryness of the summer. Irrigation ditches had already been dug that would take the water from the dams to the fields. It seemed that each year the spring floods grew larger and the summer rains less, to the point that crops often failed and livestock were in peril.
   The oldest people of the area insisted that it was not always so, but it seemed to those younger that it had always been this way. When these doubts were raised in discussion the elders pointed to the many wells that had gone dry, and the fact that the wells had to be made deeper and deeper to reach the receding water table. In fact, it had reached the point that wells had to be so deep in most places that they caved in before water could be reached. Men with picks, shovels and hammers with star drills had reached the limit that could be reached by those means.
    There was perhaps an hour or so of daylight left, not enough to bring up another wagon load of stone. Carr and the others straightened up, stretching their backs, and climbed down the rocky slope to where the crew’s wagon was parked. They climbed into the wagon, Carr taking a seat next to Joad on the wagon bed amid the residue of their lunches and the rest of their gear. Joad had become Carr’s close friend during this year of work on the dam. Joad lived with his family on the other side of the valley from Carr, and they had not previously met.
    Joad opened the conversation:
    “Carr, are you looking forward to returning to your family when the work on this dam is finished?”
    “It has been hard” Carr replied, “I will have to be the man of the family now for my mother and sisters. I will have little time for anything else.”
    “Your father was one of the best, everyone in Balan’s Valley outside of the city looked up to him” Joad said.
    Aldan, one of the masons joined in:
    “Your father was one of the first to see the need for building dams across the seven gulches that lead into the canyon. We can keep back a lot of the water from the spring floods, and then we can control the floods as the water comes rushing out of the canyon into Balan’s Valley. It’s two birds with one stone so to speak; irrigation for the dry spells and preventing the damage from floods during the wet season.”
   “Not that those city people, all high and mighty, understand any of our problems. All they want is more taxes out of us.” said Jans, one of the many sons of the farmers making up most of the crew.       “The only thing they care about is their mansions, their monuments and their temples, in that order.”
    “Too right” added Joad “A fat lot of good all the prayers and sacrifices in the temples have done for us.”
   Aldan looked away into the distance and said:
    “I always wondered how Carr’s father was able to convince Lord Balan to back this project. It’s not like the muckety-mucks to get involved in anything outside of their city lives, especially where spending money, as opposed to making money, is concerned. And more is the pity that he is not here with us today to see the plan coming to fruition.”
   “A lot of the Lords, Ladies and Priests will argue to the bitter end that there is no problem with the rains and the wells. They all insist it’s just a plot by us out in the valleys to get out of paying taxes” observed Carr.
   “We know where a lot of the taxes go” said Aldan “The nobles just have to have plaster on every surface of their mansions and temples. Did you know that it takes twenty good size trees to fire the Kilns to make a couple of square meters of plaster on their walls? That comes to about a thousand trees or more to plaster one of their mansions.”
   “That’s not the only problem” said Joad “the hills up into the mountains are being stripped bare, so there are no pine trees to collect pine nuts from.”
    Pine nuts had become an increasingly important part of the valley people’s diet as more and more of the corn and millet went to paying the taxes.
Carr added,
    “And desperate people are trying to farm those hillsides where the soil is poor, and the rains wash what soil there is down into Balan’s Valley every spring.” 
   Aldan shifted his gaze from the horizon to his companions and said:
    “You have to wonder where it will all end. It doesn’t seem like it would be any where we would want to be.”
   The wagon arrived at their campsite, and the men piled out, filing into a line for the evening bowl of beans, corn, and tomato sauce with hot peppers. Carr, Aldan, Jan and Joad joined a group that was working the north gulch dam, the farthest up the canyon. There were greetings as Aldan was known to the mason of that group, a man called Joisen. Introductions were made all around the table.
The conversation first visited the progress each group had made, their common complaints of the laziness of the wagon teamsters who refused to a man to help with loading or unloading the wagons. There was uproarious laughter as Joad told of the rock fall and the last they had seen of their teamster. All of the men at the table seemed to feel that the lazy teamster had his just deserts for one day at least.
   Then the northerners told of the occasional strangers they had seen.
    “They come down from the high mountains and act very sneaky” Joisen, the leader of the northerners, said. His tall, lanky and dark companion added “They do their best to stay hidden, like they were spying on us, but the area around the north canyon is so barren, it is hard to stay completely out of sight.”
   “Right ragged and starved looking they looked too” said the slight blonde fellow next on the bench, as he leaned on the table with both elbows. “I think it shows that they are in hard way on the other side of the mountains. I wouldn’t be surprised if they are looking for likely places to raid.”
Joisen looked directly at the blonde fellow and said:
    “You may have something there my friend. If they were looking for help or any honest business they would come up to us openly.”
   Aldan then entered the conversation:
    “I have never heard very much about the folk on the other side of the mountains. The routes over those mountains are so difficult that no one ever makes that journey, except for those who are outlawed and fleeing the authorities. The merchants and peddlers take their trade south from our area, to the City and out onto the plains.”
   “If over the mountains is a land for outlaws, one should expect the worst” said Carr. “Have any of you told the soldiers about what you have seen?” 
   “Indeed we have” said Joisen.  “Why only the other day a Hand of five men and their Bannerman passed by and asked if we had seen anything strange or odd. It was like they knew there were strange doings up in the mountains, not like when they are searching for an outlaw on the loose.”
A sound of applause came to the group from a campfire across the way.
   “It must be the Story Man” said Joad “Let’s go and hear a tale or two. It always helps me get off to a good night’s sleep, just like when my Granddad would tell us stories back at home before bed.”
The group arose from the table and ambled over to the campfire, taking seats on the logs encircling the fire. Carr mused that their timing was off as they arrived just as the Story Man was passing his hat. He added a small copper to the hat as it came his way. More men ambled over from the tables and took places around the fire.
   The Story Man was an older fellow, perhaps of about fifty years. His partially bald head was encircled with hair of silvery white, and he had a neatly trimmed short beard of the same color. He collected his hat and glanced at its meager take. He saw the crowd growing larger and decided to make one more try at shaking some more coins from this crowd.
   “I would tell you a story of Crow” he began.
Crow was perhaps the most well known of characters in the stories told in Balan’s Valley. Tall, dark of hair and eye, pale of complexion, he was a master trickster. He was able to take human form or that of a crow. Images of Crow were used by people of Balan’s Valley to ward off misfortune. That the priests had a great dislike of Crow stories ensured their popularity with the People. The Story Man began his tale….

   “Now in the days before the people came to this land, it was the land of the animal spirits. These were not animals, or people but magical beings that had some of the aspects of both the animals and the people. Despite their magic, the people were so numerous and kept coming and coming, gradually driving the animal spirits from the land by the pressure of their numbers.”
   “Even the magic of the Animal spirits could not stem the tide. No one knows where the animal spirits went. Some say they went underground, some say they arose into the sky, still others say they went to a far off magical place.”
   “There was one among them who was the smartest and the most tricksy, and he has remained among the people. He is able to present himself in a way that people cannot see his animal spirit nature under the face he shows to them. He is known as Crow or sometimes he is called The Trickster.”
   The Story man launched into the body of his tale:
   “Every man should have a song, one of his own. Such a song is made from the high points of a man’s life. The first time he brings home game to feed others, the time when he meets his first love, the time when he discovers what he does best, when his first child is born.”
   “He sings the song on great occasions, although it is not always heard by others. Sometimes it is only for the ears of someone special. He might even leave it to his son.”
   “Another man might be a gifted singer. His songs are nearly always heard by others and it pleases them to hear it. Sometimes he sings it just to please others.”
   “There was a man called No Song because he owned no song. He was never very good at hunting; he had no knack for growing crops. Many people thought him mentally deficient.”
   “At the celebrations, feasts and dances he would hide or disappear into the crowd, because people would point at him and say:
    “Over there is that pitiful man who has no song.”
   “One day No Song was sitting by the creek fishing. He was having no luck because the crayfish kept stealing his bait. No Song became angry. So when he saw a great crayfish come out from under a rock at the bottom of the stream and grab his bait in his claw, No Song yanked hard on his fishing pole. The crayfish was pulled from the water and flew through the air, landing on the bank near No Song.”
   “Crow had been watching this taking place from a perch in a tree. As No Song raised a stone to crush the crayfish, Crow took on his human form and appeared to No Song, who dropped the stone. Crayfish was on his back and flailing with all his legs.”
   “Crow said to No Song:
   “Do not crush Crayfish; I would have him for my lunch. What would you like in exchange for him?”
   “No Song could see that this was not a normal person speaking to him, and in the beings face he saw the dark black eyes and the hair that shimmered iridescent blue-black and knew that this was Crow. No Song said to him:
   “I recognize you Crow. You could give me a song, and then people would not call me No Song any longer. But it must not be one of you raucous songs such as your kin caw, it must be a song that people would like to hear, that would set young women’s hearts to flutter. It must be a song that would cause people to admire me.”
   “No Song then considered what he knew of Crow from all the stories told about him. So No Song added a condition to his wish:
   “It must not be one of your tricks that you take back, or one that turns against me as you often do with your gifts.”
   To which Crow replied:
   “How can you think such a thing of me? I would never take advantage of a pitiful person such as one who has no song. But you must use the song wisely for a proper purpose, to court a maiden or to gladden the hearts of others at a special occasion. Not to take advantage of others.”
   “This I would gladly promise” said No Song.
   “So Crow taught him a song, and there was a great surprise! Once No Song had a song to sing it turned out that he had a most pleasing voice, without any further help from Crow.”
   “There came a celebration, and No Song stood up in turn and sang his song. People were astonished. They made him sing it again, and after some others took their turns there were many who wanted to hear his song again, and he saw that it pleased them so he did, and the confidence that gave him caused him to sing it even better.”
   “People that night began to call him “Sings So Well”. Sings So Well pleased the young maidens the most of all the people, as young maidens seem to be most vulnerable to a pretty song. One of the most beautiful and forward of the maidens took Sings So Well by the hand and led him away from the crowds.”
   “Soon Sings So Well traveled from feast to celebration to special occasion, doing little else in life. He sang his song so often that people became used to it, and wanted to hear something different. Young maidens became attracted to other singers with newer songs, and who could also dance beautifully.”
   “Sings So Well had no other song, and he danced clumsily. Soon he was no longer welcome at celebrations, and he was back to hiding from crowds, and sitting on the stream bank fishing. People began to call him “Used to Sing”.
   Crow was pleased because he kept his word about making no tricks and that No Song got his just desserts for misusing his song.






Chapter 2 A Homecoming


   Carr now found himself in the dregs of winter. Soon the first hints of spring would be in the air. Work on the dams was winding up, and Carr and his crew had finished their dam. The wall of rock had buttresses built out and the space between the buttresses had been filled in with rubble and soil to reinforce against the weight of water which would soon be pressing on the dam. The spring rains would soon be on them.
   Aldan, who had lots of experience as an engineer as well as a mason from his work on the many temples and buildings in the city, was satisfied with his work. The chief builder and engineer for the entire project expressed his pleasure with their work with an authorization for a bonus to their pay.
With a pleasing weight in his purse, Carr was now seated in the bed of a wagon, the clip-clop of the horse’s hooves on the gravel road a soporific in his ears. He would be home by evening if the journey continued to be uneventful.  He was looking forward to seeing his mother, older sister Carrie, and Edde and Eddeth, cousins of the Carr’s.
   Edde and Eddeth had lost their house and most of their land though bad luck and being over extended. They had merged their remaining assets with the Carr family which became an extended family and economic partnership.
   Although Carr did not realize it, his family would find that Carr had changed in many ways. The nineteen year old adolescent who had left to work on the project a year ago was returning to them a twenty year old young man. Hard work and the company of older men had hastened the process, and Carr’s family would be surprised at the cumulative changes.
   Carr’s body had been hardened by the work, burnishing out the last of his youthful softness, and put an edge to his personality. He now had the manner and physical presence of a grown man, all planes and corded muscle which showed through his clothing. His garments were now tight to nearly bursting the seams where they had formerly been loose.
   Carr and the others in the wagon had talked themselves out by this point, and each stop of the wagon winnowed the journey’s companions.
   Carr drifted into daydreams. He saw himself with the full stature of “The Man of the Family”. He saw himself directing the work on the farm and with new respect in the larger community from this status. His dreams began to grow in grandeur, and he saw himself as an object of admiration among the girls in the community. The focus of these thoughts came to rest on Petra, and how she would be impressed with his enhanced status.
   Carr had had a crush on Petra since school days. He had passed notes to her and brought her small gifts which he blushingly had presented in his clumsy school boy manner.
Petra on her part had been friendly, and had not rejected him out right, but she had not encouraged him either. Carr had not discerned that she had any favorite among the other boys, so he had not been discouraged. When the school had a dance, she seemed happy to be asked to be his partner.
However, school came to an end, Petra’s family lived far enough away from Carr’s that further contact had been restricted to those few events which brought families of the area together.
   Furthermore, there were all the chores to be done, and then Carr’s Father had died. Petra’s family did come to the funeral, but Carr had not been able to further his contact with Petra beyond the brief formalities due to the press of all the other guests and his duties as the eldest son. She had placed her hands around his shoulders and drawn him close, her chin on his shoulder, when her turn came in the reception line. Was it his imagination or did her embrace last just a bit longer and was it a bit tighter than propriety called for? And then he was off on the dam project, unable to follow up on his romantic intentions.
   Carr’s daydreaming mind now segued into thoughts about his father, the circumstances of his death, and the connection between his father and Lord Balan.
   Was his mother correct in her belief that the death had not been accidental, and that it was a result of his father’s activities on behalf of Lord Balan? Carr in his daydreams saw himself delving into the mystery, following clues and leads as in a detective story, finally confronting the evil doers and extracting revenge upon them on behalf of his family. He would be as clever, tricksy and smoothly competent as Crow in the many stories he had heard all his life.
   The wagon came to a stop and he was shaken from his sleep by the teamster. Carr was the last one in the wagon and as he looked about he realized that he was home.
   There was a great, tall, magnificent spreading walnut tree just past the entrance to the family compound. Whenever he looked at it Carr thought of all the generations of his family that had enjoyed its shade, been nurtured by the nuts and who had in turn cared for and nurtured the tree. The stones marking the graves of his ancestors were in its shade. The tree was a living symbol of the family’s long relationship to the land.

*****

   Carr awoke the next morning in his own bed. There had been a joyous reunion the evening before at his return. Carr’s mother, Carrole, had been tearful and his older sister Carrie jubilant. Edde and Eddeth were also very happy to see him. As the evening passed in happy talk and enjoyment of this spontaneous celebration, Carr slowly became aware of two things: Carrie was very much the leader and center of things in the household now, and Carr’s mother had become withdrawn and quiet compared to how Carr remembered her.
   Carrie had blossomed physically as well. A year older than Carr, she had filled out into the full curves of a woman, but she still retained the energy and excitement of a girl. She wore her sandy brown hair in a pony tail which exposed her tiny pink ears. She had sparkling blue eyes which caught one’s attention from across the room. She positively glowed with good health and energy.
Carr’s mother, Carole, had changed too. For the first time he noticed the many strands of gray in her hair. Next he noticed a subdued dullness about her eyes, a thinness of her face and the beginning of hollows in her temples. She seemed withdrawn into her inner self. The proud, straight carriage of her frame, taller than usual in women, was still unbent but something in her posture suggested a diminishing. As the family was adjusting to the changes in Carr, he too was adjusting to the changes in them.
   He arose, dressed, rushed through his morning grooming, and entered the kitchen to the welcome aroma of fresh bread, eggs and sausage. Carrole was at the range, just as Carr had always seen her in the mornings for as long as he could remember.
   He drew close to her and embraced her in a bear hug. His mother shrugged him off wordlessly. Disconcerted, Carr looked intently at her, but she continued to avoid his gaze.
    “Mom?” he asked of her. She turned and looked at Carr.
    “I am sorry Carr; I just have so many things to do, so much on my mind right now”. There was something wrong and troubling in her eyes.
   Before he could pursue these thoughts further, his sister entered the kitchen, bursting with energy and a sunny smile.
   “So, you have finally decided to join the rest of us and be productive! Those months you spent on the dams in the company of those lazy louts has ruined you for honest work!” She crowed.
Carr laughed and held up his calloused and hardened hands.
   “Look at these” he exclaimed, “Do these look to be the hands of a lazy lay-about?”
She grinned slyly and admitted “I suppose we could allow you one morning, as you are newly home and unaccustomed to farmer’s hours.”
   “I know” he replied “A farmer works as long as he can see his hand in front of his face.”
They both sat down to the table and Carrole placed heaping plates of food in front of each of them. Carr set to the food as if starving.
   Carrie’s demeanour now changed and she opened up in a businesslike manner. “As soon as we have eaten I want to take you on a tour of things here. We have made many changes to the operation and there is a lot for you to catch up on.”
   They rose from the table and found Carrole standing in the door way, arms crossed and blocking their egress. She cleared her throat loudly in a staged sort of way and gave them “the look”. Sheepishly they returned to the table, picked up their plates, and carried them to the sink.
Carr worked the handle of the pump up and down and Carrie washed and placed their plates and utensils in the drying rack next to the sink.
   That was the first spark of Carrole’s former self Carr had noticed. This seemed so normal and natural to Carr that he began to think there was not so much wrong with his mother as he had thought. Carrie and Carr hurried out into the yard.
    In the light of day, Carr began to see many things that had not been as they were when he left. Most notably was the cottage for Edde and Eddeth. It was built of stone with a roof of tile, as were all the other structures in the area. This mode of construction had taken over from the earlier methods featuring extensive use of wood. Wood had become too precious a commodity to use so extravagantly in building.
   Next he noticed that the largest outbuilding had been extensively remodeled and enlarged. He turned a questioning glance to his sister.
   “Come” she said “You must see what wonders Edde and Eddeth have done”. They entered the building. Carr was astonished to see a finished flagstone floor where he had remembered packed earth. The building was now weather tight. Even more astonishing were equipment for processing and spinning of wool into yarn, and the looms; a smaller one for yard goods and a larger one for sheet cloth.
    “You can see that Edde and Eddeth have been busy” Carrie said.
   “Edde and Eddeth have merged what is left of their land with us, enough pasture for a flock to support Eddeth’s craft.  And then there is the woodland that Edde carefully manages to supply us with wood as needed and as a nursery for growing seedlings.
   He calls it “farming” trees and he plans to get others in the area to replant trees and “farm” them. By farming the trees he expects to produce more food, more timber and more fuel. He is anxious for you to see how he plans to make it all work.”
   Before he could digest it all, Carrie grabbed his arm and led him outside.
   “I know it is a bit of a shock to you. We have to find better ways to utilize our farm if we are to avoid losing it. There are other changes too.” 
   If the family had been surprised at the changes in Carr that a year’s absence had brought about, it was little compared to the surprises that Carr was finding in the farm.
Carrie showed him how their land had been reassessed and the uses of each parcel changed. There was less land set aside for water thirsty corn, which had always been their main cash crop. More land had been allotted to production of less water dependent crops such as millet and sorghum. There was a detailed plan for rotation of crops to avoid depletion of the soil, and extensive composting of all organic material, including household waste, to renew the soil.
   Areas had been fenced for pasture for the cattle and sheep, a large shed had been built to house poultry. A sty had been built for pigs. There was a new store house for grain and hay and a drying shed for preserving vegetables and fruit, as well as a smoke house for meats. There was a nursery where Edde was raising his tree seedlings.
   As Carrie explained all the changes and how each fit into a plan for making the farm more prosperous, Carr grew in awe of his sister. She had become “The Man of the House” in his absence. She was the one with the vision to lead.
   He was not sure how he felt about that, he had been dreaming of how the stature of that position would be his. Disappointment took root in his thoughts. Carrie had taken on a lot of stature and maturity. She absolutely reveled in the fulfillment of her new role.
Carrie expanded, holding forth on the changes that had been made.
   “We have to focus on the production of items for market, and on increasing the self sufficiency of the operation. Edde and Eddeth are a proven asset; they add a lot of value to the wool we produce. The yarn and fabric bring in far more than we could get just out of raw wool. We are looking into how we can make marketable products out of the other commodities we grow. If we could mill our grain, for example, we could then market flour, cereals and animal feed. And canned or preserved vegetables would bring in more than fresh and it would be possible to time entry of the preserved goods into the market for the best prices since they would not be perishable.”
   Carr was doing a mental double take at how well everything was going without him. Carrie was doing a superb job of things, and clearly thriving on the responsibilities and challenges. He was astonished at how well she had taken to the responsibilities.
    What was left for him, “The Man of the Family”? Disappointment began to blossom into jealousy.
Wanting to change the subject, Carr said:
   “What is going on with Mom? There was something not right with her this morning, or am I reading too much into things?” Carr asked his sister.
    “No, you are not imagining things” Carrie said. “Most days she just seems to be going through the motions of life, no real heart in it. I suppose she is still bound up in grief at the loss of Father. And anger is never far beneath the surface. When she does speak at length, it is always the same subject, how Lord Balan led father into things that wound up getting him killed. That it was not an accident.”
Carr thought about that for a minute.
    “I know that Father was meeting a lot with Balan’s agent, and even with the Lord himself. And it is common knowledge that Balan is not popular with the other Lords or the Priests. He always seemed to be on our side of things. The kind of changes he is pushing for here in Balan’s Valley have been very good for us, but undercut the interests of others. Like plaster for example.”
   Carrie took up the subject:
    “Balan has forbidden the wanton cutting of timber on his extensive lands, and encouraged reforestation on all the marginal lands left from logging. He is all for Edde’s concept of the farming of trees, and has opened some of his holdings to Edde. He has banned the use of plaster in all his own buildings and taxed plaster very heavily when used by anyone, even the Priests, within the areas under his control.”
    She continued:
    “Furthermore, he is leasing most of his woodlands to ordinary people on terms which would result in the eventual ownership of those lands so that the woodlands could be passed on and sustained within their families. The leases are conditional upon adoption of Edde’s methods of reforestation, and the careful use of the lumber and wood. The aim is to create a sustainable resource that would be in the interest of the families to maintain.”
   “In fact, it is necessary to obtain a permit to cut timber from our own lands. Edde has been appointed Forrest Master by Lord Balan and he designates the trees to be harvested, and the trees that are to remain. The clear cutting of forest is forbidden. The idea is to increase the sustainability of the woods and to maintain the population of the most desirable species, eliminating the “weed” trees.”
    Carr made a mental note to himself to have a talk with Edde.
   Carr and Carrie’s father had been one of Lord Balan’s earliest advocates, adopting Balan’s ideas and evangelizing to all the other people of Balan’s Valley. As these ideas were practiced and as the people of the valley added their own ideas, the local economy improved. The flow of money into the pockets of the people of Balan’s Valley had reduced the inflow to the coffers of the aristocracy, priests and the well connected in The City. Could all of this really have made their father a target for retribution? Carr could see certain logic in that. Had things gotten to the point that those powerful figures from The City would do such a thing out here in Balan’s territory? Moreover, would they target such a small fish as their father?
   Their father had been killed in a rock slide when he had been out touring the gorges scouting out likely sites for the dams. The fall had occurred in the dry time of summer when rock falls were almost unknown. Falls most commonly occurred during the rainy times when the rushing water destabilized loose rock.
   It had been their father’s idea to keep back as much of the water as could be held against the dry season, and to also reduce the damage of the spring floods. Lord Balan had been a backer of the plan and put the full force of his influence and resources behind the scheme. Carr supposed that the slide could have been triggered by malefactors, but it really did not seem likely in the bright light of day.
Carr directed his attention back to his sister:
    “Has there been any evidence found that the slide that killed Father was anything but an accident?”
   “No,” Carrie said, “But you can see how many people could see it that way. I have my own suspicions. It has become an obsession with Mom.”
   In a quieter mood, conversation temporarily exhausted, the siblings made their way back to the house. Carr’s mind was agitated by the many things he had to think about, and there were no easy conclusions for him to draw from any of them.  

*****

   At the end of the row, Carr stood upright and eased his back which had grown stiff from bending over, hoeing between the rows of vegetables. He looked back and then forward. There remained two more rows to weed with the hoe. Yesterday it had been moving compost to the seedling beds, and then adding manure from the barn yard to the compost pile. Somehow he had pictured things much differently than this when he was working on the dams. He had pictured himself appointing the tasks and setting priorities. It was a bur under his blanket to be following his sister’s direction. However, his ideas and suggestions were welcomed which made him feel part of the decision making.
   Just when he was feeling some equanimity in the situation, he had been sent to collect the dried “meadow muffins” or “cow pies” from the grazing meadows to be used as fuel for the cooking fires. His sense of resentment heated up again. The “muffins” were a resource not to be scorned where wood was too precious to be used extensively for fires. The dried droppings burned well, with no noticeable odor.
   Carr always enjoyed working with Edde. In many ways it was like working with his father. Edde had such a good nature and such a sense of humor that being with Edde made Carr feel good about things.
   Tomorrow, he and Edde would be leaving the chores behind to attend a meeting and drills with the militia. Carr was looking forward to a break from the endless round of chores. Truth be told, he was also looking forward to being out from under his sisters thumb. His mother’s incessant gloomy outlook and constant stream of carping was wearing on him as well.
   When he saw how well his sister managed their mother without any sign of resentment, he felt guilty for the irritation he felt. A few days break from all of this was going to be most welcome.






Chapter 3 The Militia


   Carr arose early the next morning, before the sunrise, and collected his pack and weapons. He found a bundle of sandwiches, some shelled walnuts and apples that his mother had left out for him in the kitchen. He took a long look around at the comfort of the kitchen, sighed at having to leave it again so soon, and left by the kitchen door.
   He crossed the compound to the cottage that Edde and Eddeth had built. Edde was waiting for him by the fire with hot tea and biscuits. Edde was shorter than Carr by more than a head. He had jet black hair and a full but closely cropped beard. His body build was stout, like an Ox, but not fat. He too had powerful arms and shoulders from practice with the war bow and in his case, the battle axe.
Edde motioned for quiet with a finger raised to his lips, and pointed up at the expansive loft where Eddeth was asleep. Edde and Eddeth had made their living quarters up there. The two men quickly consumed a hasty breakfast of biscuits, butter and jam, departing the cottage as they ate.
   Once they were outside, Edde stopped Carr and inspected his pack and weapons. Carr carried his bow, a long staff of yew six feet long, as tall as Carr.
   The light colored, springy outer wood of the staff faced outward from the archer. The darker, rigid heartwood of the staff faced toward the archer. The result was a bow that took all a man’s strength to bend and string it. Only a very powerful man could bring it to full draw, but when an arrow was let fly, it had great range and packed a powerful punch.
   There was a quiver of arrows, some with razor sharp broad head points, some with steel piercing bodkin points, and a pouch with spare bowstrings. There was a rectangular shield of iron wood rimmed with steel and with a hard plate of steel in the center.
   The shield hung on his back so that it covered his pack. Lastly there was a war axe, which had a hook on one side for pulling and a blade on the other for hacking. All the able bodied men of Balan’s Valley were similarly equipped, some with short stabbing swords, two handed long swords or spears instead of axes. Edde complimented Carr “You have kept your weapons in good condition. I hope you have kept up your skills with them as well.” Carr, like all the men of the valley, had been practicing with the bow since not long after he could stand.
   Archery was a skill that the men of Balan’s valley excelled at, and it showed in the broad shoulders and muscular arms that drawing of the yew bows produced. Carr was no exception. With that they set out on the road to the meeting ground.
   At first they only engaged in small talk, but gradually it grew into more serious conversation. Eddie’s resentment of the moneylenders was evident, front and center.
   “Eddeth and I borrowed heavily to finance the loom, carding and spinning equipment. We spent so much time on getting the equipment assembled and into production, that the crops were neglected. Then there was the weather, dryer than expected, and the harvest suffered greatly. Still we could have made a go of it. But those bastard money lenders moved in, and called in our debt. We were unable to make their mortgage, the moneylenders refused further credit, and the vultures from the city seized our land.”
   It became apparent that this had been the game of the money lenders all along, setting the payments such that the debtors would sooner or later fail. Then the Moneylenders could acquire land at a value far less than the open market rate. Others in Balan’s Valley had fallen into the trap as well.
Edde continued:
    “The money lenders care little for the equipment, as the land was the aim of the vultures. That was a saving grace for us as the equipment was and is our future.” An arrangement had been made with Carr’s family, and Edde and Eddeth had moved in.
Edde also expressed his skepticism concerning the rock slide that had killed Carr’s father. He observed:
    “Rockslides generally only occurred in the rainy times as the running water loosens things, and when the warm sun hits the winter cold stone. Once things dry out and warm up, it is rare for such a fall to occur. I inspected the site of the fall carefully but I did not detect signs of foul play. But I can’t help thinking that it was all too neat and convenient that the fall should happen right when your father was passing directly underneath.”
   Moving on to his other favorite subject, Edde began to explain his ideas for farming of trees.
   “You have to look at it as just that” he said “only it takes place over many seasons instead of a single one. We are careful to cull out the trees that do not have value, such as the scrubby twisted short ones, and replant with trees that are of greater value for timber, nuts, fruit, and so on. The culled scrub and the deadfalls are used for fuel. In the nursery, I grow seedlings of the best varieties for replanting.”
   He beamed with excitement as he was getting to what he considered his cleverest idea.
   “You know that most trees do not produce good seed nuts or fruit until they are tall and mature?” he asked. Then he nodded. “I collect branches from the best trees and graft them onto root stock from seedlings. That gives me saplings that think that they are tall and mature.” He grinned with pride at his cleverness. “I can control the pollination, and it makes it so much easier to gather good nuts, fruit and seeds.” Carr was impressed with the simplicity of the idea.
   By and by, they arrived at the training ground and they fell in with the other militia men. They grouped in “hands” of five men, two hands making up a squad, and twenty squads making up a company. Each squad was led by a Bannerman, and the company led by a Captain.
The men fell to greeting each set of new arrivals, and there was much talking, boasting and good cheer abounded.
   Some small groups of the men gathered, playing a game. Two men stood back to back and on the count of three spun about and displayed a hand signal. One man held out a fist, symbolizing the Mayor and his power and authority. The second man held out his fist with the thumb and small finger extended. This symbolized the Hunter’s bow. The Mayor rules the Hunter, so the man displaying the bow lost.
   They turned back to back and counted three again, whirling about. This time the first man displayed a fist with the index and middle fingers extended out side by side, symbolizing the head and beak of Crow. The second man had displayed the fist of the Mayor. Crow always tricks the Mayor, so the second man lost.
    They turned and counted to three again. This time the Crow and the Bow were displayed, the Hunter’s Bow defeating Crow. The first man had won two out of three turns, so he collected a small wager from the second man. There were many jests and the slapping of shoulders among the on lookers.
   A war horn made from a large bull’s horn sounded, and the men rushed in what seemed to be confusion but which resolved in orderly ranks and silence where the buzz and laughter of conversation had been. The Bannermen made inspection of each squad’s gear. Then twenty Bannermen stood before the Captain and clapped their swords against their armor breastplates to signify that all was in order. The Captain prodded his horse forward and he addressed the two hundred men of the gathered company.
   Herr, the Captain, was an impressive figure, of powerful build but much more lean and than other men of his age. His iron grey hair and beard were full and luxurious. Many envied his craggy, handsome countenance, so popular with the ladies. His record of service and bravery made him an object of admiration among the men as well.
Herr’s clarion voice rang out:
    “Men, I am pleased with how you have turned out for this weekend of drill and practice. Our southern borders are secure and threat of war from those lands seems far away at present. The last conflicts with those peoples seem to have settled matters between us for good and all. The peoples of both lands prosper with peace.”
   “But we face great uncertainty of the peoples from over the mountains to the north. There have been many reports of small groups sneaking about, perhaps reconnoitering our lands. We know very little of those peoples, but there are indications that they are in a bad way, so we must be vigilant in case they pose a threat. We will be sending squads to patrol our northern borders. Your Bannermen will apprise you of your squads schedules.”
   “We also will have new duties to protect our timber from those who would steal it. We will be organizing patrols to keep an eye on matters in our forests as well. I will not keep you longer from your drill. Keep to your wits and strength about you and we will return you to your homes on the morrow. Dismissed!”
   With that the Bannermen lead each squad off to practice the arts of war. The basic manner of defense was the Shield Wall. The men would interlink themselves behind their shields to form a solid wall. A second rank would hold shields over head to protect both ranks from descending arrows.  A variation was to form a Phalanx, a wedge shaped formation with shields interlocked at the sides and overhead, which would try to punch through the opposing force, like a modern tank.
   The Shield Wall could also be used bulldozer fashion to push the enemy backwards. The men would chant and every four beats advance a step. Almost all battles devolved eventually to the confrontation of one Shield Wall against another. The tactic then was either to turn the flank of your opponents’ Shield Wall, or to penetrate it. The men practiced at forming the Shield Wall, and the tactics to counter an opponents’ Shield Wall.
   Those with hooks on their axes would use the hooks to get a hold on the upper edges of the opponents’ shields and try to pull them down. Those with spears would try to get at the enemy between shields or from underneath the Shield Wall. Others would batter against the opponent’s shields with sword and axe. Once penetration was made or the wall flanked, the melee would begin.
Carr took his place in the front rank next to Edde. They interlocked shields with their left hands, leaving their right hands free to ply weapons. On command, the shield wall began to advance toward their opponents at a steady walking pace. Even though they were now armed only with wooden blunt swords and crooked sticks and staffs to simulate actual weapons, Carr could feel the edginess building as they approached an opposing shield wall.
   At a blast of the war horn, they broke into double time, shifting the shields and positions to form a phalanx on the move. Carr and Edde were at the point of the formation which crashed headlong into the opposing shield wall. There was the shock of impact, a moment of intense struggle for balance and at the same time the blows of weapons all about him. Carr felt the adrenaline rush of combat, time slowing to a crawl as suddenly everything about him devolved into chaos. He swung his stick axe, parried with his shield, driving forward, always forward against his opponent. The phalanx and the opposing shield wall dissolved into confusion. Carr became the center of his personal cyclone, losing track of everything except dodging the blows of his opponent and the desperation of getting his own blows in.
   A double blast of the war horn brought the melee to a sputtering stop. The men of both sides stood panting or bent over to help fallen comrades back to their feet. Carr felt his heart pounding; it seemed that it could not beat any faster.
   His breath came in ragged gasps and it felt as if his lungs could not get air fast enough. He began to feel the pain on various parts of his person where blows had landed. It came to him that if this had been for real, each of those points of pain would be wounds, some of them very serious.
In those few brief moments of combat, it seemed he had come nearly to the end of his strength. How would it be in real battle which would not be brought to a close by the sounding of the war horn?
At that moment he realized that he had completely lost track of Edde. He was not supposed to do that, they were to stick together as a unit, protecting each other as they fought. He felt a hand on his shoulder and turned to find Edde, just as out of breath and near exhaustion as he was.
   Herr’s voice rose above the mass of men, the expression of his face was a thunderstorm:
    “What a bunch of sheep you are! You lost all cohesion the instant you met in force! You would have all been slaughtered and your homes and women folk left to the enemy! Now form up and we will do it again! Get it right this time or I will keep you at it all night!”
   And so it went for the rest of the day. There was also practice in archery and the use of powerful crossbows. The crossbows were slow to crank back and load, requiring the coordinated effort of two men, but they were devastating to armored horsemen. A well aimed bolt from one of these crossbows could bring down a charging horse.
   Bodkin points on arrows and crossbow bolts were a new innovation as an anti armor weapon. The Bodkins were made of the hardest steel, about the same length and diameter as a finger, but square in cross section, with sharp edges. At the tip, they tapered to a pyramidal point that could pierce metal, just like the point of a can opener.
   Then there was practice at sword fighting, breaking formation and regrouping, and in the tactics of standing against mounted horsemen with pikes to stab at horse or rider and halberds to hook and unhorse the rider.
   Fuldar the Bannerman of Carr and Edde’s Hand watched them carefully, coaching here, and correcting there. He was a grizzled veteran of the wars to the south and had a reputation as a fierce fighter. With the build of a Bear and straw blonde braided beard and hair shot with silver, tied back with a leather thong, he was a man one would notice in a crowd.
   When at last Fuldar called an end to the drills the men were completely exhausted, with just enough energy to eat and set out their bedding by the campfires. As he rolled out his bedding, Carr began to think of home. He had barely gotten used to being there when he had been off to this drilling of the militia.
   Thoughts of home led to thoughts of the many chores to be done, and that brought to his mind the inevitability that his sister would be the one directing who did those chores. While that thought in particular rankled, Carr knew with a certainty that it was the right thing for him to cede leadership to Carrie.
   Fuldar called out that Carr should report to him. Carr fell in front of Fuldar. Fuldar looked him up and down before speaking.
   “What is this with you and an Axe?” He questioned. “The Axe is a weapon for a heavy man, someone who can use his weight to pull down his opponent in the shield wall, like your cousin Edde. You are tall and agile, with great reflexes, but thin and too light of build for an axe man. I know you to be an excellent swordsman as your father was before you. Did you not inherit your father’s sword?”
   Carr’s father had been the owner of a rare sword, one of the finest examples of the Sword forger’s craft.
   “The sword accompanied my father into the next word” Carr replied. “The axe was available.” Fuldar further regarded Carr.
    “I want to see you with a proper sword by the next time we meet. You easily defeated every man in this squad at swordplay before, and I mark that you could possibly be unmatched in the entire company. That is a capability I would not have wasted”
   It was true that a talent for the sword ran in Carr’s family. His father had trained them all from child hood onwards, including Carrie and Carrole. Carrie was a match for almost any man at swordplay.
Carr returned to the area where his squad was bedded. As Carr and his companions settled into their blankets, Fuldar began a tale….

*****

   Once when he was walking about the woods, Crow came across a very large and thick sycamore tree. It was so thick in the trunk that it would require six men to encircle it with arms outstretched. There were some bushes growing about the base of the tree on one side. When Crow looked more closely he discovered that there was an opening hidden behind the bushes. Stooping low, Crow entered the opening and discovered that the trunk of the sycamore was hollow.
   Crow moved himself into the sycamore right away. It was just near enough to the people of the area, and just far enough away. When he was in the form of a crow, he could sit in the upper branches and see for very long distances in every direction. When he was in human form he could enter and leave discretely.
   Now that he had a place to make a home out of, he set about to improve it. He collected green willow branches and wove a great nest like a basket. He lined it with leaves and ferns to have a soft and warm place to sleep. In fact, he became so comfortable that the urge to decorate grew strong.
One day when flying in crow form, he spotted a bit of glass glinting in the sun. Crow liked how shiny and bright it was. It gave him the idea that he should take it back to his home so that he could enjoy it there instead of flying all the way to this spot to see it.
   Soon he was collecting all manner of things, small ones when he was in crow form, larger when he walked as a man. Some were just trash, and others were quite valuable, but they all were pretty things to Crow. Being an animal spirit, neither animal nor human, Crow did not have a peg to hang the value of such things on as humans did. He knew what he liked, and cared little for what others might treasure or discard.
   There was a jewel that a rich man’s woman had left on a window sill. He had snatched it and flown away with it. There was a twisted bit of shiny metal and a ladies looking glass. There were two pearls from a necklace that broke, spilling all over the street. There was a magical knife, with a jeweled handle, taken from the workroom of a wizard. That knife could cut anything. There was a counterfeit coin of lead with a very thin coat of gold, and a real gold coin as well. There was a shiny metal bowl filled with different bits of broken colored glass, and there were many other things arranged here and there to Crow’s fancy. The thing that all Crow’s treasures had in common was that they were shiny or sparkly.
   One night as dawn approached Crow was up and set out to see about some new doings of the people of Balan’s Valley. Crow always wanted to know about any new thing happening as it frequently brought a resource he could exploit. Knowledge of new things happening also often kept Crow out of trouble.  
   Not long after Crow set out, four bandits came along. They had robbed a caravan the previous day and had spent the night in hard travel. They wanted to find a place in which they could lie low for the day. Perhaps it was just luck, or perhaps it was because they had a similar furtive outlook on the world as did Crow, that caused them to find the hidden entrance when they came upon the great sycamore tree.
   The four bandits entered the hollow tree, as it was big enough to admit them all, if somewhat tightly. They were astonished at Crow’s eclectic collection. They quickly separated out the things of value, and destroyed Crow’s wattle-work nest in the process. Thinking that the owner might be back soon, they decided to continue their flight into the day.
   Sometime later, Crow came home, his curiosity satisfied. In his bird form he landed in the upper branches, and dropped down into the hollow of the tree. He was greatly angered at the destruction he found. His nest was broken and his treasures scattered. As he began to put things right, he began to notice all the things that were missing.
   “I’ve been robbed!” he cried. Having possessions for the first time in his life, Crow was incensed that someone would take them. Taking on his bird form, he flew into the sky and began to search for the malefactors responsible.
   Now, for all his cleverness, Crow was not a tracker. He was having no luck at finding his thieves or at picking up their trail. They could have gone in any direction. So when he came across the Hunter, he knew that he needed the Hunter’s skills.
   But why should the Hunter be willing to help Crow? Since he had always kept an eye on the people of the Valley, Crow also knew what problem the Hunter always faced at the end of the day. That problem was the Village Headman, who had authority over the Hunter.
Crow flew down, landing in front of the Hunter, and in the same instant, Crow took on his human form. Seeing this transformation, the Hunter instantly knew who he had encountered. Crow approached the Hunter and explained his problem. Then Crow then whispered in the Hunters ear how the Hunter could put one over on the Headman. The Hunter considered and agreed to help Crow track down the bandits.
   It did not take the Hunter long pick up the bandits trail. By and by the Hunter and Crow arrived at the lip of the hollow in the hills where the bandits were sleeping out the day. Silently, Crow thanked the hunter, and indicated that he should watch what would come next.
   Crow became as still as a statue, and the hunter saw a vacant look come into Crow’s dark eyes. Crow had entered the dream world. He entered the dreams of each of the four bandits and quickly learned what each one of them feared most. Then he filled their heads with images terrible and powerful of their very worst fears. Crow made these images grow and multiply so that the bandits awoke screaming and ran off in four different directions in mindless panic.
   Crow gathered his treasures and as a bonus offered the Hunter the magical knife that could cut anything. This was not an idle impulse of generosity. Crow knew that the Hunter alone among the people of the village had the capability to thwart him.
   Crow was counting on being able to call a favor or two from the Hunter sometime in the future. In the same stream of self interested strategy, Crow told the Hunter to get the people of the village to come and help themselves to the remainder of the bandits plunder.
   Crow counted on the good will of the villagers and this would bring him more of that. As to what the Hunter would do with his magical knife, and how he put one over on the Mayor, that is a tale for another time.

*****

   Morning came and the men of Fuldar’s squad arose with the clanging of the morning bell. They completed their morning toilet and fell in before Herr, the Captain, in expectation of final instructions and dismissal. From Horseback Herr’s voice rang out like a clarion call:
    “There are going to be some changes in the composition of our hands. Fuldar’s squad is being tasked with a different mission.  The aim of these changes is to make this squad into an independently functioning reconnaissance unit of the company. To help prepare the company for this mission, Fuldar’s squad is being given two tasks.”
   “The First Hand, Fuldar in command, and seconded by Edde, will take on the task of patrolling the forests, with the aim of enforcing the permits for logging and apprehending any one logging contrary to those permits. This Hand will also be on the lookout for any incursion or activity from those peoples from over the mountains.”
   “The Second Hand will be responsible for patrolling in the foot hills and in the mountains with the task of finding out what is bringing these people into our territory. They will be authorized to scout into the territory on the other side of the mountains as necessary and only when the leader of that Hand deems them sufficiently experienced to do so.”
   “The Second Hand will be led by Yeager, the Hunter, whom you all know to be the most experienced hunter, tracker and stalker among the people of Balan’s Valley. I will accompany either hand from time to time. Disssmisssed!” He concluded. The men erupted in cheers.